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  • love story

    السلام عليكم
    انا ألفت قصه حب انجليزيه وان شالله تعجبكم

    once upona time
    there was a beautiful girl named jessy
    she is 17 years old lived in new york
    her mom died when she was 12 years old
    and when jessy was 15 her father got married her name
    is lizzie. well jessy didnt like lizzie very much
    .and lizzie didnt like jessy, couse jessy was a street girl
    she was always drank. and she go out with boys and drink beer with them
    one day the cops found her drinking beer
    so they bunshed her. they let her clean the beach
    and there she met a spanish guy he is so cuit
    she didnt talked to him. and in the school jessy and her best friends skiped the class and went out to drink beer
    then she saw him passing by and she waved at him and saied:hey come here
    he saied: i cant i got to go to the class
    jessy:come i need to talk to you
    then he went to her then
    ?jessy saied:what is your name
    hey saied: davied
    jessy:oh a cuit name
    davied:thanx
    then jessy's best friend gave davied a beer
    davied: is it a beer
    jessy's bestfriend: no of course not
    then he tased it ,and saied:it's a beer
    then he threw the bottel on the grass
    then the prencpel came and he saw the bottel on the grass and said:you all been drinking beer ,ha
    then he gave them all detention even davied
    so davied got mad on jessy
    then jessy went to apologias to davied
    then he forgive her and he invited her and her bestfriend
    to his football game
    so jessy and her friend went to his football game. davied's team won. so he was happy
    after the game jessy waited for davied

    انكمل القصه بكره
    وابي اشوف رايكم في القصه وابي الصراحه لو سمحتو لاني انا امألفتها
    التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة bnt aldo7a; 30-05-05, 08:51 PM.

  • #2
    مشاركة: love story

    مشكورين

    يا نفسي عزيزه قولي شنو الكلمات اللي غلط فيها علشان اصححها

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    • #3
      مشاركة: love story

      يا نفسي عزيزه

      السبلنج صح مافيها شي ابي اصححك بس ماشتهي اشرح
      ويكون في علمك درست في امريكا 3 سنين اوكي لا تفلسف علينا

      وانا ماعتقد اني باكمل القصه

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      • #4
        مشاركة: love story

        لا عادي اتغشمر معاك ومشكور على رايك

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        • #5
          مشاركة: love story

          سوري حسبتج ولد ماقصد لا تزعلين

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          • #6
            مشاركة: love story

            القصه حلوه بس شكلها طويله وايد لان فيها تفاصيل دقيقه:34:

            انتظر التكمله باحر من الجمر,,

            تحياتي لقلمج

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            • #7
              مشاركة: love story

              يسلموووووووو على القصه

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